Fertile in My Ex-Boyfriend's Dungeon: An Interactive Adventure Level 1: Featuring Goblins, Orcs, and Beetlekin

This is a fun, interactive story that gives you some control on how the story plays out. While Quirky, the way the characters spoke made it almost cringey. The way they described various things through their scenes made it a little difficult to finish. But for some people, this will add to the books quirk and fun appeal.

I found this to be an interesting, adult choose-your-adventure title. It's nice to see a female lead. I was even inspired toward fanfiction of the title.

Amanda Clovers new character Beatrix is going to be very fun watching grow and develope over the course of this new series. This book also brings a more light hearted and fun aspect to the genre of cyoa erotica. I can't wait to read the next one!

It could use a polish, but a few errors didn't detract from the overall effect. Judging it purely on what it's trying to accomplish, it's nearly a 5 star. It's SPICY.

The one great thing about this new CHYOA series is that it's a lot more forgiving with giving you more ways to avoid the bad endings than the last series. While admittedly it was quite obvious with Zimon stringing our girl along, it was a bit of a surprise to see how different the monsters were in that they weren't entirely written out to be stereotypical except the goblins. Can't wait to see what level 2 has in store and if events with the other ex-girlfriends will be included.

a nice start to a sexy journey

It's a great mixture of adventure and erotica. The writing itself can be a little lacking at times, but all the plot lines are exciting to read. c

The story was good but it ended too quickly; it could have used more challenges...

Not unscathed, but at least unbred. This is a pretty entertaining choose your own adventure, if you're into kinky taboo sex (with monsters). It took me a while too get past the first pair but was keen enough to pass the last and reach the 2nd level. There are quite a number of typos in the book, but most you can figure out what was intended (though at least one was a sentence ending in a nonsensical string of words). However the concept and design are cool and it must been hard to proofreaded and perfectly edit such a branching story, so I'm not to bothered by it; you get the intended point inmost cases. Interested to see how the 2nd level plays out.