Naked Battle Elves - Chronicle 3 Kindle Edition

I read the first 3 installments in about 2 hours, quick kinky little novellas. Looking forward to reading the rest of the series.

This story is being told in the serial format, and at the price is a pretty good deal IMHO. I am enjoying the story so far, and each installment is getting longer and more detailed. The writer is fleshing out the world.Not sure why reviewers mention porn. There is sex, but expect for the first story, it is brief and not that graphic. I read erotica, and believe me, this is far from that. But truth of the matter, in ancient times the people were a randy bunch, with few social stygmas against having a good time.4 stars because I think the writer should have a distinct beginning, middle, and end in every installment of the serial.

Storyline was okay at first, but could have been way better. Grammar errors and spelling were blatant, however, and happened periodically; it ruined the story a bit.

The further I get in this series the longer and more in depth he gets with the characters and world.

Waste of time, space, and money. Almost 1/3 of the "book" is publicity for other Ryan Erin stuff. The story is too short to even be interesting and never even gets going before you are at the end (sorry, publicity!). Pity you can't give zero or negative stars. P.S. If you bought this for the erotica - you will also be disappointed.

The story and characters developed more in this chapter. Which was good to get some.more meat to the story. Looking forward to the next

Enjoyed

Not going to lie, felt a little bit ashamed in buying it, but you can't go wrong with gorgeous, half-nude elf babes and a surprisingly cool fantasy setting. I'll get Chronicle 4.

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