Taking the Vore Tour: A collection of Full Tour stories Kindle Edition

Reading this is as good as Devion Art! Lots to love and makes A reader hungry too! Pred prey and the other... LMFAO! 😂

As a fan of vore, it wasn't a bad little book. There's room for improvement, sure, but it was still a fun read. It's entirely safe vore. No one dies or gets digested (except for a character we never see who is only mentioned in passing). And it is exactly what the book advertises. Full tour vore. In one end, out the other, and everything in between.It collects 4 short stories. 3 about anthropomorphic animals and one about a human and a werewolf. The first story is about a mouse who enjoys being prey and a rabbit who wants to see what it's like to be a pred. The second is about a married fox couple and the wife let's her husband eat her for his birthday. The third about a monster hunter who fails to kill a werewolf. And the fourth is about a rabbit guy who gets drunk and ends up going home with a fox woman. You can pretty much figure out where each story is going to go more or less based on those descriptions.I think I actually enjoyed the werewolf one the most. I'm a fan of anthropomorphic animals too, but the werewolf one was just the most fun.So why is a vore junkie like me not giving it a 5 star rating? Here are the few problems I had with it... There were a few typos here and there. Nothing too bad but there were at least a few moments where I had to re-read a sentence a couple of times, trying to figure out what word the author actually meant to use. There is no sex in this book. It's strictly vore. Which isn't a bad thing on its own, but the vore itself felt kind of rushed. I wish it would have been a little longer with a bit more detail. There are a few sections that read a little amateurish and you can clearly tell it's a first time author. Things like, 'Claire, the monster hunter, held her longspear out cautiously as she strode out into the forest seeking her prey.' being used as pretty much the only setup for the opening of a story. Show don't tell. Instead of saying 'Claire, the monster hunter' just say Claire and then show us through her actions and character description that she is a monster hunter.But those 3 problems I had with the book weren't enough to keep me from enjoying it. It is a new author (as far as I can tell. I haven't found any other books by Zarpaulus) and for being a first-timer this author still did a pretty good job. I guess the only real reason I'm being critical is because I enjoyed it and I want to see the author improve with future books. Because I definitely want to see future books from this author.

Had a good selection of stories to read from, all of which were written pretty well. Would recommend to anyone 18 or older.